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wwp@yahoogroups.com: English check please Eduardo Hutter 2007-Jun-30 05:51:00
Could someone check the text for any errors (grammatical or in style), 
please?

"At the Kondiaronk belvedere on Mount Royal, the drum salutes the sun at 
its summer solstice on the National Aboriginal Solidarity Day.

The ceremony takes place all over Canada every year since 1996 and this 
time gathered First Nations leaders and dignitaries from different 
levels of government to celebrate the Solstice of the Nations, when 
Innus from the Uashat-Maliotenam community 
<http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uashat-Maliotenam,_Quebec> lit a fire to 
be passed to the organizers of the F?te Nationale du Qu?bec 
<http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/F%C3%AAte_nationale_du_Qu%C3%A9bec> and 
bringing together, creating stronger bonds of friendship between the 
peoples from Qu?bec."

Thanks in advance,

Eduardo

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