wwp@yahoogroups.com:
Re: could somebody correct my colour text
Marc Huff 2008-Oct-01 14:55:00
I italicized what I recommend you to change.
_Marc Huff
WHdigital, Inc.
On Wed, Oct 1, 2008 at 7:49 AM, diallery <#removed#> wrote:
> could one english-american native speaker correct my text:
>
> A big red dot standing in an environment full of green and brown
> shades, the* agaric fly* (amanita muscaria) strikes you with its
> powerful *color.*
>
> These toxic mushrooms are used around the world as a symbol of good luck.
>
> A week before the WWP a nice group of these fungi inspired me, but
> only one survived* until shooting *time.
>
>
http://geoimages.berkeley.edu:8090/gen/live_preview/wwp908/html/DaniFuch...
>
> Thanks!
>
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