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Re: please don't laugh : this is my text for time event
George Row 2009-Jun-27 22:21:00
Eckart ,
I think your text was understandable it just sounded like what it is - something written by a non-native speaker ... I haven't seen your picture so this is just a re-write based on what I assume is intended to be conveyed by the text.
all the best
George
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This panorama includes many different signs of time: a hot-air balloon ascending into the sky draws light-tracks in the air; there is archaic fire as it could have been seen 10,000 years ago, and high-tech laser and led-light from the modern era.
For thousands of years midsummer night rituals have been celebrated, marking the change of time.
This is a place of such a ritual. In recent decades more and more people have attended this event in Teutoburger Wald, Germany. But this was the last one - from next year it will be forbidden to celebrate midsummer here. The forest management will not permit this anymore.
So this will perhaps be the end of time ...?
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I am not sure whether it is true that this particular event is one that has been celebrated for centuries, but if it is I might have said:
This is a place of such a ritual. In recent decades more and more modern people have attended this ancient event in Teutoburger Wald, Germany.
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--- In #removed#, Eckart Sch?nlau <eckartschoenlau@...> wrote:
>
> but I'm not native english speaker. so please correct it - no maybe it
> sounds very funny (?).
>
> Here you can watch differend signs of time. A hot-air balloon ascending
> up in the sky draws some light-tracks in the air. Also you can see
> archaic fire, like 10000 years before, and highttech laser and
> led-light. And since some thousand years during midsummer night rituals
> of changing time were celebratet. And this happens at this special place.
> In the last decades more and more people came to this event in
> Teutoburger Wald, Germany. Now this was the last one - next year it's
> forbidden to celebrate here. The forest management will not permit this
> anymore. So this will maybe the end of time *g*
>
> thanks
> Eckart Schoenlau
>